Submit your draft of the paragraph about “Raymond’s Run” here. Remember, your body paragraph should have four parts: a) topic sentence that states your claim, b) a context sentence that sets the quote up, c) a direct quote with MLA citation, and d) commentary that explains how the quote illustrates your idea.

Once you have posted your paragraph, begin reading ALL the paragraphs posted as comments. Your aim is to identify the three (3) BEST paragraphs. Your criteria should include: a) paragraphs that include all the above parts, b) paragraphs that state an interesting claim in topic sentence, and c) paragraphs that are well written and free of errors.