Second Draft of Short Story Paper

Now that you have revised your paragraphs, cutting down the “to be” verbs and adding action verbs to your paper, post this new revision as a comment to this post.

Remember to add the following heading to your paper:

Your Name
”Title of Short Story”
Date

Skip one line and then post your paragraphs. Please proofread BEFORE posting. Some RTF will not translate cleanly when you copy and paste into HTML format.